Comments : Strawberry love

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Found this to be a lovely write with hints of passion and tenderness.

    Well conveyed.

    Craig

  • 6 years ago

    by gumshuda

    I am so glad this piece is nominated, how beautiful!

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A particularly delectable and ...sweet sort of write. Beautifully crafted, Michael.

    Take care

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    I've read read read this and I am still left speechless..

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Did it just get REALLY hot in here? Woah! Where's my fan......:)

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Mr D and his "strawberry patch" :)

    Very good chap, you'll have all the ladies wanting a nibble!

  • 6 years ago

    by Blank

    This was just amazing.
    I love the different types of writing skills used, really wanted to make me read more and wonder what was really going on inbetween those lines.

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Ooh er! Very well done Michael, great imagery! :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Phoenix ¥

    Very evocative poem - it lingers on... x

  • 6 years ago

    by Bleu

    I did not want this poem to end. Yet, it ended on such a perfect, beautiful and tender note. My goodness it was LOVELY!