Another wandering lost soul.

by Blank   May 2, 2018


This icy glacier stretches far and wide, like that one story, where that monster may reside.

Your hands are numb and blue, transparent and mind fooled.
Your soul wonders free.
Fresh, out of its cocoon.

"What's going on?" Your mind calls out for help. None of your deities can save you now, count your blessings.
Count those gifts.
No divine rights exist.

An eternal walk, your soul no longer wants to be of drift.
"Another wandering lost soul?" A calm and soothed voice calls, but was never seen or found.

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  • 6 years ago

    by Mark

    Great beginning, I've nominated it for the weekly contest. Nice write!

    • 6 years ago

      by Blank

      Oh my god, thank you so much that has really touched my heart that you enjoyed it!

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A dark early post from you and one I thoroughly enjoyed.
    A warm welcome to the site and all the very best,

    Ben

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I like this a lot. Nicely paced, nice format with sprinkling of rhyme.

    Take care.

    • 6 years ago

      by Blank

      I'm a sucker for rhyme, I'm trying to get better and writin poems without it.

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    I wish I had a nomination left as this is one of those dark twisty little poems that I love.

    It could be considered macabre by some but and in a certain frame of mind I would also.

    In my present state I think it's simply says "this is how it is".

    Poetry is a funny thing! Whatever you read, you will be affected by and interprete in your own way.

    We do not have access to the thoughts of others, yet we hope we have a little understanding.

    I enjoyed reading this massively.

    Regards

    Craig

    • 6 years ago

      by Blank

      Glad you enjoyed it, this is only the beginning for me!

  • 6 years ago

    by Courtney Hough

    love this poem and the imagery in it :) great write

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