Comments : When Angels Sighed

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Yes surly will make the readers sigh especially the ladies. Its gives
    such a warm heart-ed feel that amidst all the chaos and and grim darkness
    a woman's being just brings all to life...lovely lovey read!!!

    I enjoyed it made me smile at the end...keep penning!!

    • 6 years ago

      by William Mae

      Thank you Meena very much, and thank you Tony

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    All I can say is I'm glad this is nominated, just wow.

    • 6 years ago

      by Lost One

      I can second this^

      Also added to favorites.

    • 6 years ago

      by William Mae

      Thank you Em

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    A well written piece William
    well done

    Michael :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Congrats in the Win :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Congrats

  • 6 years ago

    by Mark

    Congrats!

  • 6 years ago

    by Lost One

    Judges Comment

    Taken from darkness to a place where angels quite literally sigh, this piece (for me at least) stole the show. With great alliteration to creation, or intelligent design, the author/subject finds higher purpose upon meeting the woman he feels was created for him: his other half who to him was beautiful enough for even the angels to take notice. William demonstrates a poetic ear with his firm grasp of rhythm and rhyme. There are a few instances of wonderful personification that breathe life into the poem as well, and overall I felt this was most deserving of my 10