by Kryptonite Dreamer May 4, 2018
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
"She's not breathing... CLEAR!! Come on look at me K.." |
by Babycakez
Beautiful a Very deep written piece you wrote here So Sorry for you loss just Know she is watching you from above and is awaiting the day you two meet at the gates to heaven |
Dying of a broken/shattered heart ... fantastic metaphors in this heart wrenching write. I'm so sorry for your loss xx |
by Em (marmite)
Omg this is beautifully sad |
by Bleu
Yeah, you tore me apart completely with this. This piece is beyond Beautiful. Truly heartbreaking and pulls the reader in. This is such a beautiful write. |
by William Mae
The poem or prose felt heart felt, I think as poets we always strive to make a reader feel. To experience emotion. It had that. I would tweak the flow as I do to mine all the time, but it’s a very good write. |