by Phoenix ¥ May 5, 2018
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
It’s so perfect in here |
Brilliant metaphors for this sad piece Phoenix. If only your heart could let go of this love that cannot ever be, allowing you to find your true love that's waiting for you out there. Hugs :-) x |
by Phoenix ¥
Thanks Kitty - you’ve hit the nail on the head with letting go - I do struggle with that, especially with ‘the love that cannot be’ - I like that line. |
by Brise
I enjoyed reading this poem, the metaphor you use to describe love in a bubble is perfect, love is so fragile sometimes it does feel like a bubble it'll eventually pop. Great imagery, I enjoy reading your poems :) |
by Phoenix ¥
Thanks Brise! x I did have the word fragile in my original draft for precisely that reason - I should have kept it in! Take care and thanks for commenting xx |