I wanted so much more from this...you took me into the forest and left me beside this tree that you gave a brief description of and....that was it!

I did like the comparison of one fallen leaf being equivalent to your time on this earth..that was good but...what did you do with the rest of you time there? What else did you see? smell? experience? A Hiabun should be like a diary and...I hope you add more to it...I really do because it has potential...