I wanted to do more with this but it was one of those that I just couldn't wrap my head around so you get it in its basic format.

No matter the sight, the environment or a little object
no matter how insignificant it is, everything about them reminds
you of the person who is in your heart. It maybe mundane things
but it all leads to the person whom you miss very much...keep
penning my friend :)

Craig,

I wasn't sure about the end, as just read your BBQ one. But I am so pleased that this had such an ending, as it showed a lovely line of emotion
Well done

I wasn't sure about the whole thing to be honest. But it's sat in drafts long enough so figured I would float it.

Like your honesty dude.

Regards

Craig

I liked this very much. It is a thought provoking piece and I think that the last couple of lines really sums up the conflict. Definitely worth publishing it. Milly x