Consume

by DarkAngel   May 9, 2018


I Knew This Boy Once

As Sweet As Can Be

But I Consumed All His love

And He Became Like Me.

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  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    An interesting piece. Short in stature but huge in implication. Excellent. Milly x

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Dark angel,

    I like the way this is formatted, and far more behind such a short piece.
    All I would say is that maybe lower-case some of the beginning of words.
    well done however

    Michael :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Short and .... not so sweet! Excellent little write, well done.

    All the best

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