Clever use of repeating verses/rhyme to show the course of insanity, leading to eventual demise.

S.R.H.

this certainly is a twisty tale of depression. You kept me reading with intrigue all the way to the end. the fight against it is certainly not an easy one.

all the best
Michael :)

This touched me deeply!!

The anguish, inevitable reality of this depression returning and your raw emotions/pleas are so strong here. I really liked the repetition of asking this person not complain, because your hurt is real and pain is deep.