Fate of the Forgotten

Nams, powerful write, so few words but really packs a punch. Well done-

That the thought of death is far apart from the reality of death has been superbly portrayed in this bullet sized prose. So much depth in so few words is excellent. Milly x

Thank you all.

A poem that connects suicidal ideations with the death of loved ones, and I know the story behind this. That makes it all more poignant.

I would like it better if you put a period after death.
After all, it is the end.

I did not nominate this because I love you, but because you did a wonderful job with this Senryu and it deserves recognition.

Thanks for sharing.

S

I liked the power this piece has although hard hitting (I hope not literal) as it's only a few words so packs a real kick in the gullet.. My only query is the title as it's the last word of the whole piece.. How about 'grim reaper?'
As I said previously I do hope it isn't literal and that you are well.
Take care
Em x