Always Like Something

by Brise   May 11, 2018


I always feel like I'm something in between
Amidst the anger or joy but ever incomplete
I'm exhausted feeling and thinking so many
It hurts my thoughts to weigh so plenty

I always feel like I'm something almost tangible
Physically visible but not really actual
Like my happiness is almost touchable
But the emotion doesn't seem functional

I always feel like I'm something evanescent
Always suffering from this fleeting incessant
Feeling one way or another in fades
Smothered from sentimental shades

I always feel like I'm something unfinished
That this hurt and pain is never diminished
For my bliss and love seems always partial
Somber and broken lurking careful

I always feel like something never-ending
Like the constant switch of feelings is unending
That I'm condemned to this neverendless
Forevermore killing me senseless

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  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Loved the rhyming and rhythm. A wonderfully creative and emotional journey. Cleverly written. Most enjoyable read. Best wishes Milly x

    • 6 years ago

      by Brise

      Thank you Milly! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Lemon Squeezy

    This is fantastic work! Its both Eloquent and creative. I especially like the word choice. It gave the piece beauty and character well done!!

    • 6 years ago

      by Brise

      Thank you Lemon Squeezy, I did struggle with the wording but I'm glad you enjoyed reading it notheless :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Phoenix ¥

    Love this poem Brise - great to read some more of your work. I can relate to you so much. Being at the mercy of ever changing emotions is exhausting and confusing but can make for great poetry like this! xx

    • 6 years ago

      by Brise

      Thank you Phoenix and I can say the same thing about you. I love reading your poetry I feel like I can relate to you the most ! But thank you and I hope to read more from you as well:)

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    i love this, but then I would as I love rhyming poetry. Well done, Brise.

    • 6 years ago

      by Brise

      Thank you Ben ! Same here I enjoy rhyming poetry, as a matter of fact it's hard for me to write poetry without rhyming ha ha but anyways thank for your comment greatly appreciated:)

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I like the clever word-play. I realise the poem is expressing a wavering emotional journey, but I could feel darkness in the despair of, just wanting more.

    • 6 years ago

      by Brise

      I always enjoy reading your comments Mr. Darcy and yes you're right this poem is about my emotional journey. But now that you mentioned it, it is about wanting more, I guess I didn't know that myself until you said it now lol but anyways thank you for your time, greatly appreciated;)

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