I'm sorry if this is true. I mean, I know people don't always write what they feel, but some people do. It's a really good poem. Sad, but good. Very good.

Thank you Faery, and yes, it is true, I wrote it looking thru my child's eyes after my divorce I found out so many things, and the situation for all of us has improved!
--Sher

Lucifer,

If you liked that one then you'll probably like A Family Heartbreak. I appreciate your comment babe, very thoughtful.

Always
Sherry Lynn
exhaustedmother2003@yahoo.com

Wow, this is a really powerful poem.
My friend was in a similair situation.
I thank you for expressing this situation and acknowledging that this affects everyone. Keep up the wonderful work.

~Kelly

that poem was so amazing, i was almost in tears, it really hit me hard because i felt like i was that child, because i almost am, sept the part about my father having brain damage, thankyou for writing this poem it was really deep and heart felt i absolutely loved it!

:( Great Poem! Really sad though...

Email me sometime!

Luv, Jess x

Very good, thanks for the comments on mine, on that one poem, she kissed me, there was a typo, thanks for pointing that out! Very good Though......

First off, thank you for your comments on my poem "cancer"....very touching =) I liked this poem you wrote because I can relate....this pretty much describes my childhood. It was wonderfully written....be proud of this piece.

Wow.... very well written! o.O

Wow i can very well relate to this poem nice one 5/5 though it made me very sad.

I've never been involved in an hitting abusive relationship, but i do live with an alcoholic.....nice poem, brought tears to my eyes.

Wow...that is so sad...its very powerful and well written....sorry to hear that its true... ~*~CINDY~*~

Wow... thats verrry emotional *tears*... 5/5

Wow, im sorry about this, but i can relate to every word you wrote, i tottaly luv this poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I almost cried...you have very powerful worda and im happy to hear that everything is better for your children and you.

This made me cry.
5/5.
I'm sorry.