Backstage crushes

by Eve   May 13, 2018


Sorrow and sadness
I hate this warm liquid of sadness that feeds my lungs
I don't want it anymore
I thought his eyes were magnetic
But then I saw his smile
Big,smart and ambitious
And the way he played with everyone
Little smirks and little winks
That created storms of what ifs
Oh the way he was carrying himself
I just sat and admired him for seconds
Even when he was anxious,that big smile was there
Ready to steal my mind
And replace it with pictures of him
And his painful indifference
But I don't mind it,I was born to admire people like they are statues and still be the cold,marble one
People that inspire you to write poems are dangerous
they're always gonna hunt a little corner of your mind
And the funniest thing of all
They will never gonna find out

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  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    I'm with Em on the typos but looking beyond them this is a captivating piece about unrequited love, a most interesting read. Best wishes Milly x

    • 6 years ago

      by Eve

      thank you very much!!

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    This is a 'different' kind of write which has really intrigued my mind very much... There's a few typos if you don't mind my saying:
    "And they always gonna hunt a little corner"
    I think this line would flow better without the and maybe use a few fullstops at the beginning here to counteract (I think that's the word) as the 'and' especially as you use 'and' in a sentence further down also 'they' here should be 'they're'
    The end line "they will" again should be "they're"
    Hope you don't mind me saying
    Take care and well done on a very interesting write

    • 6 years ago

      by Eve

      thank you very much.I'm not very good at english that's why there are typos,but thank you for correcting me

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