Hi Michael such amazing words and I truly wished that people could and would follow. Take care and all the best

Great stuff, Michael. I keep promising myself that I will give this form a go but end up conveniently avoiding it!

Take care.

Michael, niiiiiccccceeeeee.....you have more guts to undertake this than me, lol...a good solid message in this write also.

Michael me old fruit this is exceptional, your forms is impeccable and it's content couldn't be truer. ..If I had my nominations back I would nominate but I'm still on "newbie" status lol

nice work fella

Ben

ah, at last - a shadow I can ask in - ah

First off let me say well done with the form Shadow Sonnet and
the message within is something we all should try and follow.
Now here is a form I need to have a go at! Well done!!

Just a few things I would like to say and I hope you don't mind.
This sentence:

flow with the heart and writing will flow
^^this has only 9 syllabus instead of 10

pain we will share and show others our pain
^^this actually has 11 syllabus because "our" if I'm not
mistaken is 2 syllabus

These are just a few and I hope I've not offended you or
said anything wrong.

Keep penning...take care

An excellent piece Michael with great technique in what is for most a difficult form. With a wonderful message to the world too. Loved it. Milly x