Meena,

This is a wonderful piece of formed poetry, and well written. I like the tone of the poem, looking after ones heart is always a must :)
Well done
Much love
Michael x

I like this Meena, its dark and inspiring. The form is not one I had heard of, so I am grateful to you for this.

The sadness that we hold can make the world we live in appear like a labyrinth. When we fall on despairing times, it can be easy to wallow and drown It is at times like this, when that snake should be grabbed and discarded. We all have inner strength and at these times we should listen to its calling and make the right decision - leading you to freedom.

This form is not easy, the IP and the rhyme scheme are restrictive, but you, have created and inspirational write.

Thank you.

A dark piece, but filled with inspiration. So true, it rests upon us, everything is up to us. Wonderfully penned.

Best regards,
Mr. Rious