Comments : The Game

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    A threatening write. I must say it is refreshing to read a dark poem. Through the verses you reveal an unmentioned weakness that will be exploited if they ever decide to play. This 'chink' presumably a truth to be used against them, something that would, undoubtedly, be the killing blow.

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      I need explain no further as you pretty much hit the nail on the head.

      Chuffed you liked it.

      Craig

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Ooh! The dark side of Craig! Love it! :-) x
    =^.^=

    *typo in first stanza ... should be 'lose'

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Glad you liked it and thanks for the heads up on the typo,

    Craig x