lighten up and quit (senyru)

by Michael   May 16, 2018


A heavy smoker
succeeds and gives up smoking
Now for the weight loss

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  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    A heavy person
    succeeds and gives up eating
    time to start smoking

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Hmm I think you'll find the weight loss a hard one... My friend and his dad both gave up then started comfort eating oops lol but never give up, you've done well to quit if literal
    Take care
    Em x

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Em,
      The 'heavy' is actually the weight of the smoker - if that makes sense ;)

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