Comments : Jealousy among the Thorns

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Nicely written, good rhyming throughout. I never thought of my roses in this way. I know I handle the branches with care, they do like to bite.

  • 6 years ago

    by Lost One

    Beautiful poem. I have a few edits for you.
    Line 2: "amidst"
    Line 4: "contribute TO their"
    Line 5: "answer's" or ''answer is"
    Line 11: "To command all the attention"
    Line 14: "cares"

    You have a unique way of seeing the world. This is an amazing piece

  • 6 years ago

    by Brise

    This is such a beautiful poem full of imagery

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    You have given beauty not only to the
    rose but also the branches/thorns. Without
    one there is not the other...one is beautiful
    the other it's preserver. Both working to
    build a bond...of that made sense

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    congratulations

  • 6 years ago

    by Mark

    Great win! Congrats!

  • 6 years ago

    by Domenico Sottile

    Wonderfully written!!

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Congrats in the,win!