Hello and welcome to PnQ's

I thought I would read your first poem posted on here. I like the fact you have chosen to use a 3 line poem. There are forms, like the, haiku and senyru that have a 3 line structure. Unlike your poem, they use restricted syllables.

Your poem talks about light as a metaphor, right? One of goodness and positivity, perhaps? In the presence of such light, one may well feel weakened. The 2nd line, an alternative reason for the 'fold' - this is where, for me, I loose my way. It could, though, be a person who has risen through adversity to become a better person for their tough journey? Line 3, Is there a typo in the word, 'keeping' should it be keeping? if so, does this line refer to the goodness of nature (outdoors) providing medicinal properties to the soul?

I liked this, the way you explained so much in just 3 lines. If you like the haiku form, maybe you could condense it further to fit?

Take care.