by Em (marmite)
Mr D Mr D Mr D I absolutely loved this.. There's humour I think unless it's just me that laughed at someone slipping (oops my bad) and there's sadness within this piece in my opinion as you (well aren't we all) seem to or so I think realise that you're not getting any younger. What I liked most about this is because it is a well rhymed acrostic and acrostics are hard alone nevermind rhymed and you did both superbly... In all honesty I'd think you'd been taken over by aliens if you didn't lol |
Well done, nice rhymes, lovely flow! |
by Ben Pickard
A tight acrostic which rhymes effortlessly with humour to boot. superb work, Michael - truly. |