Another well super rhymed poem. I like the layout of this one.

Take care.

Wow wow wow... OK so firstly welcome to the site and secondly what a wonderfully rhymed piece which is really relatable and I assume with how you've explained heartbreak you've experienced it and possibly more than once.... This is really well rhymed and flows perfectly, I personally also read it abit like a heartbeat speeding up for some reason maybe I just need sleep haha

Take care and again welcome
Em x