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by Ben Pickard
Some lovely use of metaphor. Well done - I enjoyed this one. Take care and all the best
by Mr. Darcy
Hi. Although I like the poem, the syllable count is incorrect. I'll count them for you:Salt/y air and o/cean breeze =7 .. Cast/ing my hope out in/to the sea =9 .. Fish/ing for my rust/y lead = 7 ^ Let me know if this makes sense. Take care.