Comments : shine

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I don't know if this is for your girl, Craig, but I can imagine it might be. Ultimately, though, it doesn't really matter if it is or isn't - it's an inspirational piece.

    Take care

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Hey up dude.

      This was born due to a canoe and kayak course I taught a few weeks ago.

      I was a bit out of my depth on this weekend as I had a young person who endures autism and a bunch of other things going on also.

      Despite his problems and my inexperience with such things he achieved a nationally and internationally recognised qualification.

      Chuffed to bits for the kid.

      Regards

      Craig

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Craig, love this! Well rhymed and very inspirational. Positive vibes for that someone special. It's crazy how we always see someone else?

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Hey Bren.

      This is a poem I wrote for or perhaps more so about many people.

      It's about getting over and past the "i can't do this" attitude.

      You can do anything if you really want to.

      Craig x

  • 6 years ago

    by Lyical Madness

    Absolutely beautiful!

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Thank you x

  • 6 years ago

    by SERA

    Love this! Great motivational poem.
    We all need a reminder from time to time that ''we can'' and that we're good enough as we are.
    Your spot on, you musn't compare your strengths to other peoples. An easy trap to fall into!
    Pushing through negativity and discovering your own potential is a battle worth fighting :)
    You've put into words an inward battle we all face at many points throughout life.
    Nice one!