by Ben Pickard
With that refrain, I found myself almost strumming my bashed up old acoustic guitar to this. |
Thanks so much Ben - not my usual style, but it needed purging! :-) x |
by Mr. Darcy
It bloody hurt me! :p |
lol ... "sorry" :-) xx |
by Michael
Miss Kitty :) |
Thanks Michael ... yeah it was weird ... like I didn't know what to do with the prepared emotion that wasn't used - it's still floating around I think! lol :-) x |
Wow. This is a wonderful piece. Although not your usual rhyming style it is absolutely perfect. It portrays the internal dilemma on how you expect to feel and how you actually feel in such a situation and it is spot on. Well done on a great write. |
Aw Milly, it's lovely to see you here and thanks so much for your lovely comments :-) x |
by Em (marmite)
The line 'it didn't hurt much at all' to me seems as though it hurt alot not sure how to describe it but I'm sure you know what I mean |
Lol. It used to hurt a lot and I braced myself for the final bit hurting a lot too, but it didn't, it only hurt a little bit. See? :-) x |
by Skyfire
This spoke to me! And I think it applies to so many situations in life that we find ourselves afraid to let go of. |
Thanks Skyfire :-) x |