by Alice Jun 2, 2018
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
We are all heir to Sheol’s fumes: |
by Em (marmite)
I absolutely love this although I'd take the and from line 7 as in my opinion it takes the flow a little but that's only a suggestion and it's still a fantastic piece with wonderful imagery |
A vivid dark piece with dynamic impact, strangely compelling read. Best wishes Milly x |