I kinda like and kinda don't like the '..'. Haha. But it's stylistic, unique, and somewhat gives an emphasis for the next line, I like it for that. Metamorphosis! Haha. The metamorphosis of a butterfly is one of the most amazing things in this world, it has been a subject of many poems, essays, stories, or other literary writes each one gives different interpretations leading to only one meaning -- being free and beautiful. Good job here! Keep penning! (:

--- MKKK

I kinda like and kinda don't like the '..'. Haha. But it's stylistic, unique, and somewhat gives an emphasis for the next line, I like it for that. Metamorphosis! Haha. The metamorphosis of a butterfly is one of the most amazing things in this world, it has been a subject of many poems, essays, stories, or other literary writes each one gives different interpretations leading to only one meaning -- being free and beautiful. Good job here! Keep penning! (:

--- MKKK