Feeling Freely

Wow! I love this poem. I was riding the waves if your words thinking ‘this is me’ so to have a happy ending was great ;-)
Brilliant writing, well deserved nomination xx

It feels wonderful doesn't it? To finally exhale and just ahhhhh....hugs!

To be finally free. I know that feeling and able to breathe again. Enjoyed reading and all the best to you

Freedom is often the hardest thing to gain, regardless of whether it be emotional or physical. Either thing is an emotional and turbulent battle.

Sometimes freedom can be as much of a curse as it can be a cure. On reading this I think it is perhaps your cure.

I loved the construction of this poem and the emotions it conveyed.

I vaguely remember when you first joined us on PnQ. In such a short space of time your rhymes and skills in other areas have improved ten fold. You have always had the ability to convey things but now you are doing so flawlessly.

Well In my humble opinion anyway.

Keep it going

Craig x

As Ben pointed out, nice rhyme and alliteration. I also liked the meter - it made me nod like a Churchill dog! Lol x