by Em (marmite)
I'll just leave this here... Nominated |
Aw Em, thank you so much :-) xx |
Love how you enumerate negative things that happen in everyone... We just need to let go all of them and feel really free! Nice write! |
lol ... thanks MKKK ... I'm FREEEEE!!! hahaha :-) x |
by Michael
Miss Kitty, |
Thanks so much wonderful fella :-) x |
by Ben Pickard
Excellent, fluent piece, Kitty with some wonderful alliteration. |
Thanks so much Ben :-) x |
by Mr. Darcy
As Ben pointed out, nice rhyme and alliteration. I also liked the meter - it made me nod like a Churchill dog! Lol x |
Lol ... nice image! haha, thanks Mr D :-) x |
by CJ Maleney
Freedom is often the hardest thing to gain, regardless of whether it be emotional or physical. Either thing is an emotional and turbulent battle. |
Aw Craig, thanks so much for your lovely comments :-) x |
To be finally free. I know that feeling and able to breathe again. Enjoyed reading and all the best to you |
Lovely to hear from you Dagnar and thanks so much for your lovely comments :-) x |
by Brenda
It feels wonderful doesn't it? To finally exhale and just ahhhhh....hugs! |
Feels fabitty fab Brenda! Thank you :-) x |
by Phoenix ¥
Wow! I love this poem. I was riding the waves if your words thinking ‘this is me’ so to have a happy ending was great ;-) |
Ah thanks so much Phoenix :-) x |