Hypnotised by your image.
by Blank Jun 9, 2018
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By the way you walk. |
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Latest Comments
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6 years ago
by Michael
Fenrir,
Photos hold so many emotions, I enjoyed reading your little and nice rhymed piece
Well done
Michael :)-
6 years ago
by Blank
Thank you Michael.
Photos are frozen stories and emotions, beautiful moments.
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6 years ago
by MoonMaiden
This is sweet and adorable. I like it, very much.
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6 years ago
by Mr. Darcy
Just a thought, would this sound any good?
By the way you walk.
And the way you talk.
I'm running out of time,
Please, be mine?
The smile you wear,
My heart can't bare.
The time I wasted,
the dreams created.
Your photo swings,
left and right.
I'll be thinking of you
tonight. . .
Please be mine?-
6 years ago
by Blank
It's very nice, and the feedback is appreciated.
But I think I prefer my version, thank you though.
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6 years agoby Em (marmite)
This is very interesting and as if you haven't exactly met or seen this person but you've been intrigued by them so make your own image.... Very creative I would possibly take the "and" out of stanza 4 though just to improve flow a little
