Comments : i have a friend

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello.
    The frustration is clear in this poem.
    I like the format and how it leads to a SHOUTING conclusion. A point well made.
    There are a few typos: approval / choice

    Take care.

    • 6 years ago

      by Bless_Poet

      thank you very much on this feedback, it is well appreciated.

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A warm welcome to the site - keep writing,

    Ben

    • 6 years ago

      by Bless_Poet

      thank you for the warmest welcome.