Comments : Stick in The Mud

  • 6 years ago

    by MoonMaiden

    I honestly can't explain how relatable this is & how absolutely brilliant this peice is.

    The metaphors were spot in. The imagery and the feels.. I mean, there's so much being said in this peice.

    My absolute favorite part..

    "I am a reflection of what I have seen, felt, or touched
    And I'm sorry that some of you look at me and don't see very much"

    Those lines really struck me. I'm adding this to my favs.

    Keep writing, Take care (:

    • 6 years ago

      by -] Nobody [-

      Thank you for the kind words queen.

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Nominated that's all

  • 6 years ago

    by Ren

    I'm in tears. This poem is everything to me right now. You did a phenomenal job with expressing these hard emotions so clearly, and your rhyming is spot on! I'm glad to see this nominated, and I am at a loss for more words to say. But I will leave you with a (<3) love button. Sending so much peace and love and healing to you. I hope it finds you well.

    • 6 years ago

      by -] Nobody [-

      Thank you Ren and I'm glad that you enjoyed it, but I'm also sorry to hear that you related to it. I get to see a counselor and a psychiatrist on the 22nd (4 more days!), if they could just fix me, you guys wouldn't have to hear from me anymore! :) Thank you again though and may you find peace and plenty of healing for yourself aswell lady

  • 6 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Dam..
    The ending

    "And though I am diagnosed with major depression, insomnia, and anxiety
    I get no help, because I'm just a druggie looking for pills to society"

    Dammm... Holy... f...

    ya know.. this is sooo true. We have all been here.. im sorry society is so messed up mate.. truely..