Comments : A storm has brewed (Rondeau)

  • 6 years ago

    by Mark

    It's beautiful Michael. Last stanza is breathtakingly relatable!

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Mark :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Blank

    "So while my soul is damp within."
    This line was beautiful, this whole poem was beautiful.
    Amazing write, definetly adding to my favourites without hesitation.

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      thank you Fenrir, lovely comments :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Michael this is brilliant. So dark and moody, each word suits the theme perfectly and the Rondeau has been perfectly executed. Bravo! :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Glad to see this nominated. I am speechless. Hugs to you

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Dagmar :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

    Wow! The flow is perfect! Just beautiful!

    --- MKKK

  • 6 years ago

    by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

    Wow! The flow is perfect! Just beautiful!

    --- MKKK

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you MKKK :)