Wishes

by Thomas Key   Jul 11, 2004


Wishes
By Tommy Key

Everyone wishes for something,
a car, money, fame, fortune.

But do wishes really come true?
Does it do any good to make wishes?

My wish is to live these few days,
these 7 days,
as if they were my last,
as if I was going to die on the eighth day.

My wish is to be with my friends,
the ones I hold dear,
the ones I Cherish more than life.

My wish is to Live.

MY wish so far has not been granted,
constant set backs,
too hot of days to go out,
my friends being too busy.

My wish has not come true so far,
its been a living h*ll for me,
So much for living it up,
so much for trying to Live.

Always depressed,
always sad,
when is this gonna end?
when is it gonna be over?

I prey
everyday
that someone
will grant my wish.

And I'm still preying,
even now.

So please, grant it for me.
Please, make my wish come true.

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  • 20 years ago

    by Amy

    Great poem, Tommy!! I had tears in my eyes and I'm so so so sorry!! If I could, I'd grant you that wish in a second!!! I wish you didn't feel that way and I wish I knew what to do to make you happy and get that wish!! (hehe...those are a couple of my wishes) but I'd give up everything, if I could grant that wish for you. I love you SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO much and I wish I knew what to do to make things better!! Anyway, great poem...you're such a great writer and I notice you just keep getting better and better!! You're so sweet and great and wonderful! Anyway, wonderful poem!!
    Love you ALWAYS and FOREVER until the end of time and then some! ;),

    ~Amy~

  • 20 years ago

    by Ashley Morris

    Tommy, great poem. I'm sorry that you can't get your wish. But my wishes have come true. 'Cause I met you and Amy. So, now I have more to live for than just my parents. And I thank God, soooo much for allowing me to talk to you 2. Well, great poem. I'm sorry. And I hope things will get better for you.

    Love,
    Ashley

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