Our Story

by Hellon   Jun 20, 2018


...and, I shiver as
I watch the last leaf fall
and slowly drift in
the wind that winter
brings...

it was our tree for many a year...

we laughed, read, ate apples,
hiding under the canopy
of its summer splendor.

Yes, we thought the world
was our oyster then and time was
something only old people worried about

but...

that was not to be in
our story...

@Hellon 20 June 2018

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  • 6 years ago

    by D.

    Elegant, lovely poem! I think trees are quite symbolic, and you paint a rebatable and sad story here. The metaphor of things around us ending is always a poignant one

  • 6 years ago

    by Noureddine

    Nice poem carry on

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Oh wow!! All I can say is I'm glad to see this nominated as I'm lost for words

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A lovely emotional piece. Milly x

  • 6 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Hellon,

    Your poetry and this poem for one is touching and elegant. I love your crafty way of blending words with your emotions and moments in time. Beautiful!

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