Deaf And Blind Or An Unresponsive Mind

by CJ Maleney   Jun 20, 2018


Slumber is now calling
Yet I simply cannot hear
Exhausted as I am and feel
Dreams are nowhere near

It is not that I fight such things
But it's a long term state of me
When I should rest and sleep
Silver scales carve through my stream

Little fish that constantly swim
A silver sliver of self doubt
Sometime I wish the river stopped flowing
Sometimes I wish for drought.

That elusive dreaming state of being
The times when fantasy should flow
But the dreams wake me once again
They just won't let me go

Is it that I can't relax
Am i screwed up and just too wired
Is it thoughts of deeds forgotten
Was I born to burn in fire

Are my ears and mind so unresponsive
That I can't fathom silence and peace?
I see rise both a moon then sun
And I still won't find release

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  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Another excellent piece. Well worth the nomination. Not being able to sleep has a huge impact on all aspects of life. Milly x

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      It does, I crash massively over Saturday night and Sunday morning. Then wake feeling fidgety.

      It also leads to some random poems lol

      Craig x

  • 6 years ago

    by Hellon

    When your sleep pattern enters this phase it's so very hard to break it...you describe what a lot of people experience at some point in their lives...it's just awful but I've discovered a few methods to overcome it :)

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      I'll overcome it surely as England are playing in the world cup lol

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    I love this Craig and can really relate. Beautiful descriptions of your plight and expressed with your wonderful rhyming. Nominated :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is excellent, Craig - really well rhymed and so fluent. I have to admit, I found myself nodding along in understanding of this and was left feeling only sympathy for you.

    Take care and all the best as ever,

    Ben

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Cheers dude.

      It's a bugger when you can't sleep and then when you finally do some screwed up dream forces you to wake.

      Regards

      Craig

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