by Ben Pickard
What a beautiful piece. Well done on this and good to see a new post from you. |
by CRAFTY KEN
I like your little Kat Sinners gospel! Hope I don't hurt your feeling with my critique', but, a by the book Rondeau is the following; a thirteen-line poem, divided into three stanzas of 5, 3, and 5 lines, with only two rhymes throughout and with the opening words of the first line used as a refrain at the end of the second and third stanzas. I agree with Ben that it is a lovely poem, love the heartfelt expressions throughout, and the unforced rhyming. Good job! |
by Brenda
Shane, a lovely write. Wonderful to see you on the boards. I hope all is well with you. |
by Mark
Great win! |
by Ren
All I can say is love button has been clicked...like...multiple times (<3) |
by mossgirl19
Wow, a lovely poem. Congrats on the win! |
by Brise
This is beautiful! Congrats on the win :) |
by Ya----Na
Thank you so much, everyone, once again |
Aw Shane! A well deserved win. Such a beautiful write and perfect for the Rondeau form :-) x |
by naaz
Sorry, won't be able to write in depth comment for this beautiful creation of yours, but would like to say something. |
by Ya----Na
Mais elle ne comprend pas qu'une fleur ne peut pas fleurir sans soleil, et l'homme ne peut pas vivre sans amour. |
by gumshuda
Judging comment: |