Comments : Dead to the world.

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Oh Michael... This hit me hard. Hugs.

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Em :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Wow Michael hugs to you

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Dagmar hugs :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by Blank

    Absolutely powerful piece, so glad to see it was nominated, Good luck!

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Fenrir :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hi Michael - this is inspiring. Sounds like a re-birth to me.
    Good for you (man hug)

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Mr D and for your nomination :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Mark

    This is breathtaking Michael

  • 6 years ago

    by Darren

    Nice power and imagery Micheal.

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Darren :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    I've read thousands (only a slight exaggeration) of poems about dreaming Michael ... but I can honestly say that this one most closely reflects exactly how my dreams are and feel. Just brilliant! Clever man! :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Lovely as ever Miss Kitty, thank you :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by Mark

    Wonderful win!

  • 6 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Congrats Michael

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you SG :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Ren

    Phenomenal work as always, Michael!! So so sooo beautifully done!! Congrats on the win!! :) and also...(<3) ^love button has been clicked!!

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Miss Ren, lovely words as ever, and thank you :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Michael,
    This is fantastic. congrats on the win.

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Nams :0x

  • 6 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    judging comment-

    Savory words mixed with touching thoughts,
    the metaphor is dazzling with visually stimulating word messages-

    Life is exhausting and can be draining when you lay awake and overthink or just ponder.
    Hallucinating visual masterpiece...Love this!!

  • 6 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Judging comment:

    There is this crisp rawness to this piece — like fried bitter gourd — and many of us have felt this feeling described by the poet sometime in our lives, and it is raw, bitter, and unpleasant but we still need to chew on this feeling whenever it decides to stay with us.
    I personally loved certain descriptions and imagery — castaway on shores, waves rolling like a camera, memories displayed like pop-up books, images of former partners — such raw expressions. And the poem kept getting better and better as I moved on towards the end, with perfect words to describe the feeling of being lost as one is falling from great heights, and wishing to wake up to all of it as if it was just a bad dream. But it isn't, is it?