Boundless Passion

by Jonathan Jewell   Jul 4, 2018


I wish I had a girlfriend,
And I wish it could be you.
This poem might sound silly,
But every word is true.

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  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Love this.

    So simple but so true for many. Reminds me of being 16 years old.

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    Craig

  • 6 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    ya very nice
    true worlds.

  • 6 years ago

    by Jonathan Jewell

    I am not sure if 'would' is better in the second sentence, than 'could', or if it would make sense to change the whole thing to, 'I think it should be you'. The latter turns it into one long and dumb chat up line, so quicker to reject that, except for exaggerating the [intended] bathetic fall of from the 'sublime' title. But I shall leave it in original form.

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