Comments : THE MOUSE

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Ken, your poetry never fails to disappoint, not least because of the little stories that are so often behind your work.

    All the best as ever

    • 6 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Thanks Ben, as you can see, I reverted to my beloved metaphorical style for this Mouse poem.

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    I had to chuckle at this Ken especially when I realised the truth behind it... Fantastic rhyme story

    • 6 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Thanks Em, we humans must be very special, as even a mouse wants to live with us.

  • 6 years ago

    by Darren

    This is great Ken, heartwarming and fun, thanks for sharing.

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    This really made me smile.

    Well done fella.

    Craig

    • 6 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Much thanks for the nomination Craig!

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    My dear grandma would literally hide chocolates in her underwear drawer...hahaha. We would look elsewhere only to find out that all the chocolates were there. I remembered my dear grandma while reading this one. The humor and the great flow was really a treat, Ken. Thank you for posting your story, too. :-)

    • 6 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Thanks Mel for also sharing your story, your beloved grandma and my Mom knew how to hide their chocolates! Glad that I lifted your spirits, and brought back those precious memories. Love Ken

  • 6 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Ken you made me smile again. All the very best

    • 6 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Hey Dag, two out of three ain't bad! Thanks again, Ken