Wow! This is absolutely beautiful Tanya. Such wonderful encouragement to maintain one's integrity.

I love the structure too, the way you bring the reader back to 'yes'.

Hi Tanya,

a really well written piece, and such a huge difference between those two little words.
A wise poem and nominated

Michael :)

I am totally blown away by this. Two small words holding major consequences. I have learned in life that it is absolutely ok to say no depending on the situation. But then here comes yes and I am helping my granddaughter to say yes to positive things. Wow I could go on and on but I rest . Glad to see it nominated. All the very best

Tanya this is absolutely brilliant! You've conveyed such an important message. I'm so glad it's nominated :-)
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A brilliant write - well done xx

Tanya, love this! It's like a letter to your child asking them to forge their own path and dont just follow the others because following them will be bad for her. It will destroy her luster and shine. Totally get that, well done-

Brilliant well written it's always good for them to choose the right path but it's always nice when someone helps to make the right decision