by Paul Hirst Jul 12, 2018
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
If only your words were falling leaves |
I love the seasonal imagery and metaphors here Paul and it's different from your usual style. Nicely done! :-) x |
by Paul Hirst
Thank you |
by Michael
Hi Paul, |
by Paul Hirst
Hi Michael |
by Mr. Darcy
I like the way you've written this poem using a series of smilies. After an argument separation brings with it loneliness and pained reflection. |
by Paul Hirst
Thank You |