There comes a time.....

by Dagmar Wilson   Jul 13, 2018


It's been a long night, the moon is moving on
a puzzle of feelings left untouched.

Searching for words that defines "feelings"
they all around me, inside of me,
I am tired of explaining.

That what I am feeling is a reaction
as they keep adding salt to my crazy nature,
there comes a time when saying no should not be a problem.

    report violation
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  • 6 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    I agree with the others, that that line with the "salt" opens up a box of many thoughts. The most common one heard is; being called, "The salt of the earth". In a true poem form, you have expressed deep feelings, with a deep desire for the cleansing, preserving, attributes of salt! Nice work. Couple of hugs thrown in too!

  • 6 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    "adding salt to my crazy nature"

    keep true to your crazy nature because saying no is being true to yourself!

    love that line, hugs you!

    • 6 years ago

      by Dagmar Wilson

      Thank you Andrea for your encouraging words. Hugs

  • 6 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    "They keep adding salt to my crazy nature" ... fantastic Dagmar! I like the idea of not allowing anyone to affect my feelings, but in truth, when people 'add salt' it's hard not to react! I wish I had a nomination left for this. :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 6 years ago

    by SAKHILE INNOCENT MHLANGA

    Well written, and very deep.
    I enjoyed it, thank you.

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