by Mortal Utopia Jul 13, 2018
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
They said I was born as a teardrop |
by Darren
judges comment |
by Maple Tree
Feelings of being excused or ignored within another person’s heart is what I'm feeling with this beautiful and yet sorrowful poem. I'm really admiring the metaphor of the writer being a teardrop, that was creative, unique and a delight to read. Just wonderful!! |
A beautiful poem, well deserving its win. Well done, |
by Mark
Love the poetic idea, life as your teardrop |
What a brilliant and unique concept. Clever and we'll written and I'm glad to see its nominated Mortal :-) x |