This is fabulous Scrittore. Brilliant imagery and wonderfully rhymed :-) x
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This is a fantastic visual write. Glad to see it has been nominated!

This is so unique - I love the imagery, so clear that I could almost taste the saltiness in the beach air. x

This is a beautifully crafted poem.
Filled with powerful visuals and intense, metaphoric
messages. I do love having the background for the poem but as the reader this poem allowed me to take it beyond that. Very touching and powerful poem this week!