When she calls my name (haiku)

by Poet on the Piano Jul 23, 2018 category : Nature, environment / nature

I've been dead for years
then she leaned against my back -
now my branches bend.

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6 years ago
by Courageous Dreamer

This is simple yet packs so much meaning, just as I imagine a Haiku being. It's been a while (years) since I've read any poetry so thank you for such a wonderful piece to read! :)
6 years ago
by Em (marmite)

There are no words I can say for this at risk of duplicating others comments other than I'm glad it's nominated that's for sure...
- 6 years ago
  by Poet on the Piano
  
  Thank you all <3
6 years ago
by Meena Krish

There is much said in these lines...I like
the sentiments and the image it brings...
Nicely done!
6 years ago
by Ya----Na

Haiku is a beautiful format and you made it even more. My best wishes for the weekly contest too.
6 years ago
by Michael

MaryAnne

Really like the sentiment with your piece, so subtle and beautiful indeed!
Michael :)x

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