Comments : When she calls my name (haiku)

  • 6 years ago

    by Blank

    Beautiful haiku.

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    MaryAnne

    Really like the sentiment with your piece, so subtle and beautiful indeed!
    Michael :)x

  • 6 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Haiku is a beautiful format and you made it even more. My best wishes for the weekly contest too.

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    There is much said in these lines...I like
    the sentiments and the image it brings...
    Nicely done!

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    There are no words I can say for this at risk of duplicating others comments other than I'm glad it's nominated that's for sure...

  • 6 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This is simple yet packs so much meaning, just as I imagine a Haiku being. It's been a while (years) since I've read any poetry so thank you for such a wonderful piece to read! :)