Comments : Silence Must Break the Dawn (Acrostic)

  • 6 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    A very unique way of writing acrostic with good content for the readers.
    My best wishes

  • 6 years ago

    by Mark

    Lovely win!

  • 6 years ago

    by Ren

    This is absolutely fantastic!! Wow!! So much talent!! :) Congrats on your win!!

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Congratulations, Jessica - excellent work that deserved the front page recognition it has received!

    Take care and all the best,

    Ben

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    I like the way you have penned this acrostic leaving a word
    pause for the reader to take it in. The imagery and tone of this
    poem is captivating...Congrats on the Win~

  • 6 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Another acrostic this week that deserves to be highlighted.
    the breaking words within the message on the left hand side ats creativity and I do love it when poet's add a special touch to the form.

    the word usage is breathtaking- "Nature's hushed rapture
    Cathedrals within seashells
    Enrapture my imaginary castle"

    ^^^^^ MERCY these lines are pretty!

    really love this elegant and unique poem!

  • 6 years ago

    by Darren

    judges comment

    I am a sucker for a form, any form. I love how a simple acrostic can read so powerfully.
    Each break in-between each stanza interrupts the flow and goes against the 'rule' of an acrostic poem. I love the imagery I feel like I am there and I love the fact that each stanza is almost a poem in its own right and that's why this poem gets my 10. (10 points)