Breakup (Senryu)

by Walter Jul 28, 2018 category : Sadness, depression / lost relationships

Footsteps left behind
Can be traced back to your heart
Tears wash them away

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6 years ago
by Augustus Black

Absolutely beautiful! Written with a high mind. Nice work man....
- 6 years ago
  by Walter
  
  Cheers, thanks for your comment Augustus
6 years ago
by Ren

Sad yet beautifully portrayed in such few words. Well done!
- 6 years ago
  by Walter
  
  Thanks so much for your comments Ren!
6 years ago
by Em (marmite)

This is excellent and very sad
- 6 years ago
  by Walter
  
  Lovely comment, thanks so much Em
6 years ago
by Mr. Darcy

Very good. Love eroded by the pain/deceit/ dishonesty...
- 6 years ago
  by Walter
  
  Thank you kindly Mr Darcy

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