Comments : Breakup (Senryu)

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Very good. Love eroded by the pain/deceit/ dishonesty...

    • 6 years ago

      by Walter

      Thank you kindly Mr Darcy

  • 6 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    This is excellent and very sad

    • 6 years ago

      by Walter

      Lovely comment, thanks so much Em

  • 6 years ago

    by Ren

    Sad yet beautifully portrayed in such few words. Well done!

    • 6 years ago

      by Walter

      Thanks so much for your comments Ren!

  • 6 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    Absolutely beautiful! Written with a high mind. Nice work man....

    • 6 years ago

      by Walter

      Cheers, thanks for your comment Augustus