Marky - Excellent.. I still dont know why you post when i cant nominte.. GRR
I will nominate when i can..
You really are grasping the sonnets lately.. Love it..

WOW! Amazing write!

Great stuff, Mark. Quick note - line twelve has 9 syllables, there.

All the best as ever,

Ben

Awesome write. All the very best to you.

A beautifully written and captivating sonnet and your meter and flow are a joy to see.
Good to see and enjoyed very much.
Thank you for sharing.